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托??荚嚳偣灿兴膫€(gè)部分組成,包括聽力、寫作、閱讀和口語。小編有看到很多小伙伴認(rèn)為托福考試很難,需要花很多的時(shí)間去備考,想要托福成績拿到高分就需要在最有可能的部分好好的拿分,其實(shí)在托??荚囍形覀儑鴥?nèi)考試最容易拿高分的一個(gè)地方就是我們的寫作,托福寫作有分為綜合和獨(dú)立部分,那么托福綜合寫作流程是怎么樣的呢。此外,寫作練好對(duì)我們來說是很重要的哦,相信大家在平常的練習(xí)中都喜歡去看高分范文已經(jīng)萬能模板等,學(xué)習(xí)這些范文的寫作方式,這是一個(gè)很好的方式,因此今天小編給大家分享一些托福綜合寫作萬能模板的相關(guān)內(nèi)容,更好的幫助大家寫好作文哦。

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一、托福綜合寫作萬能模板

模版范例一:

The lecture and the reading discuss ( ). The lecturer puts forward 3 pioints and effectively contradicts the opinions of the reading.

First of all, the reading says that ( ). In contrast, the lecture claims that ( ). By this way, the lecture contradicts the first opinion of the reading.

Second, the reading claims that ( ), while according to the lecture, this is not the case. The lecturer says that ( ). By casting doubt on an important peice of evidence of the reading, the lecture contradicts the second claim of the reading.

Finally, the reading states that ( ), while the lecture claims that ( ). Thus the lecture refutes the last claim of the reading.

模版范例二:

The lecture apparently refutes the points illustrated in the reading material. According to the professor, ________________.On the contrary, the reading contends an opposite stand that_____.

The first point the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that___________, which differs from the statement in the reading that_____.

Another evidence the speaker adopts to contradict the passage is________. However, the reading states that_________.

In the conclusion, the point made in the lecture contrasts with what is presented in the reading. As the professor claims, ________whereas the reading material holds that________.

二、托福寫作萬能理由匯總

托福寫作萬能理由匯總:效率(efficient)

萬能關(guān)鍵字:效率(efficient)

萬能關(guān)鍵詞句: make full use of resource、not to squander efficiency-conscious、take a shortcut 走捷徑、Efficiency is gold、 We use half of the effort, but we can double the result等等都可以用到關(guān)于“效率”的寫作中。

萬能段落: Being efficiency means not to waste and not to squander. Sometimes we use half of the effort, but we can double the result. Modern people chase after efficiency that is the catchword around the globe. Our work efficiency can be enhanced if we adopt proper method; our learning efficiency can be elevated if we take a shortcut. Anyway, when we make full use of the devices at our hands, we may achieve efficiency, which can save our time and efforts.

以上是關(guān)于“效率”的詞句以及段落的使用,那么,如果將之與托福真題結(jié)合起來是不是就完美了!所以,下面我們一起來看一下和“效率”相關(guān)的寫作話題有哪些。

2011年7月23日北美托福考試題目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Teachers should give students more group assignments because students work more efficiently in groups.

寫作思路:

(1)同意題目的觀點(diǎn):

Students exchange ideas and it easier to produce new and creative ideas.

Students are more enthusiastic in group assignments than in individual work

The spirit of teamwork is easily cultivated in the students' work

(2)反對(duì)題目的觀點(diǎn):

Students are easily distracted in group assignments

Students may rely on other students' work and do not do their own part in group work

Work cannot be entirely balanced and it may create unfair in group work

托福寫作萬能理由匯總:環(huán)保(environmental)

教育類話題其實(shí)包括很多更加細(xì)小的話題,“環(huán)?!笨梢杂脕斫逃藗?,注意環(huán)境保護(hù),珍愛健康;生活方式中也離不開“環(huán)?!痹掝},現(xiàn)在很多人的生活方式趨于“環(huán)?!被挥靡淮涡钥曜?、塑料袋等;環(huán)境類更是離不開這個(gè)話題。由此可見,“環(huán)?!边@個(gè)關(guān)鍵字還是和托福寫作息息相關(guān)的。

看似簡單的兩個(gè)字,其實(shí)可以撐起很多篇托福寫作的骨架。這就要看大家在托福寫作中的運(yùn)用能力了。還有就是關(guān)于這兩個(gè)關(guān)鍵字,拓展的一些詞組、句子以及萬能段落,也是我們?cè)谕懈懽髦袝?huì)用到的提分的關(guān)鍵。下面一起來看一下。

1.萬能關(guān)鍵字:環(huán)保(environmental)

2.萬能關(guān)鍵詞句: emit hazardous materials、alternative energy、maintain ecological balance,go green 多種樹,講環(huán)保、environmental awareness、environment-friendly、reduce, reuse, and recycle 、sustainable development、exhaust natural resources、There is no boundary between human and nature等都是經(jīng)常用在托福寫作中的。

3.萬能段落:Being environmental is related to the natural environment, its protection and conservation. In order to maintain ecological balance, our environment awareness should be enhanced. When we are green-washed; when we become environment-friendly, we may realize three “r”s: reduce, reuse, and recycle. These three “r”s are vital to the preservation of a cleaner, better environment that will benefit people’s wellbeing.

下面我們來看一下針對(duì)“環(huán)保”這個(gè)話題,托福寫作真題有哪些題目是與之對(duì)應(yīng)的呢?

下面是2013年9月8日大陸考試托福寫作的題目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The government should focus more on environmental problems and less on economic development.

寫作思路:

(1)同意題目中的觀點(diǎn):

1. Environmental deterioration is a major problem worldwide.

2. It relates to the sustainable development of the country.

3. A sound environment is beneficial to human survival.

(2)反對(duì)題目中的觀點(diǎn):

1. Economic development should be made the first priority.

2. It provides financial support for environmental protection.

Economic development takes effects in a shorter period.

托福寫作萬能理由之節(jié)約(economical)

1.萬能關(guān)鍵字:節(jié)約(economical)

2.萬能關(guān)鍵詞句: money-conscious 重金錢的、cut down the price、steady development、Waste not, and want not.不浪費(fèi),不短缺 、Husband energy, and cut emission.節(jié)能減排、To save is to earn、Our society is economy-driven.節(jié)約型社會(huì)、A penny saved is a penny earned等可以用在關(guān)于“節(jié)約”的話題寫作中。

3.萬能段落:Being economical means using the minimum of time or resources necessary for effectiveness. Being economical or money- saving is vital to people as an English proverb puts it that “ a penny saved is a penny earned“. When we achieve economy in expenditure, we are in fact making money work for us. When we bargain and cut down the price, we are money-conscious; when we take bus instead of driving our own cars, we are reducing the cost for petrol.

以上是針對(duì)托福寫作中“節(jié)約”話題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容,以及由此拓展的詞匯和句子。下面,我們來看一下,在托福考試真題中,有什么題目十余只對(duì)應(yīng)的呢?

2014年6月28日大陸考試托福寫作題目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to reduce air pollution is for the government to raise the cost of petrol for cars.

寫作思路:

(1)同意題目的觀點(diǎn):

1. Higher cost leads to lower demand of petrol,leading to the reduction of air pollution.

2. Less demand of petrol encourages companies to develop clean energy.

3. High income from petrol allows relevant comp government to develop clean energy.

(2)反對(duì)題目的觀點(diǎn):

1. The rich do not care about the price of it, and continue to use large amount of petrol.

2. Exploring some renewable resources is a valid solution to reduce air pollution.

3. Driving up the cost may lose the hearts of the people

托福寫作萬能理由之愿望(desire)

1.萬能關(guān)鍵字:愿望(desire)

2.萬能關(guān)鍵詞句:

crave for/long for/yearn for/pine for creatures of desire 欲望之物、meet our needs to one’s heart’s content 盡情享受、fulfill one’s dream satisfy one’s vanity滿足虛榮心等。

3.萬能段落(可以運(yùn)用到托福寫作中,一定會(huì)給你的文章增色不少哦):Desire refers to our hope or inclination. We are all creatures of desires. We try our best/endeavor to satisfy our desire and vanity: the desire to relax to our heart’s content; the desire to gain more knowledge; the desire to earn big money and the desire to be loved. To meet one’s desire is to enjoy a happy life. Hence, we are all willing to sacrifice our time and efforts to make our heart’s desire fulfilled.

我們掌握了“愿望“這個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞的素材,那么怎么將之與托福寫作真題聯(lián)系起來呢?下面看一個(gè)與之相關(guān)的話題:

2011年10月27日大陸托福考試真題題目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Most business people are motivated by the desire for money.

思路介紹(反對(duì)題目的觀點(diǎn)):

? Most business organization exist to make a profit,but it would be wrong to say that business people are motivated purely by the desire for greater wealth.

論點(diǎn)1:

Many successful companies have their social responsibilities.

? They raise funds for children's charities.

? They actively defend women's rights. ,

? A significant portion of profit goes to great causes.

論點(diǎn)2:

An established enterprise has environmental ?

? They abide by environmental protection laws.

? The emphasis is on sustainable Safeguarding environment and human health is the top priority.

論點(diǎn)3

Visionary business leaders are interested in innovation.

? They invest enormously in scientific research.

? Advanced technology is their life's passion.

? They aim to create a better world in the future

結(jié)論:

? Apart from their ambitions for money,business people can be motivated by social and environmental responsibilities as well as their enthusiasm for creativity.

It is true that most business organizations exist to make a profit,but it would be wrong to say that business people are motivated purely by the desire for greater wealth.

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三、詳解托福綜合寫作的評(píng)分細(xì)則

綜合寫作是托福寫作板塊中的其中一項(xiàng)。托??荚嚨膶懽鞑糠址譃榫C合(Integrated writing)和獨(dú)立(Independent writing)兩塊,這兩塊分別獨(dú)立評(píng)分,取平均值后得到最終的分?jǐn)?shù)。也就是說,這兩個(gè)部分各占一半權(quán)重,因此應(yīng)給予相同程度的重視。關(guān)于這兩部分的了解,強(qiáng)烈建議同學(xué)們自己去看看ETS出版的托福考試官方指南(OG),OG里面對(duì)于考試形式和評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)有非常詳盡的介紹,有些同學(xué)在準(zhǔn)備輸出端考試(寫作或者口語)的時(shí)候,居然連評(píng)分細(xì)則都不看,僅憑自己的主觀臆測和對(duì)于老師講解的依稀記憶去打造自己的文章,考不好真的不奇怪。下面,我們就來分析一下托福考試的評(píng)分細(xì)則。

綜合寫作的滿分要求是:

A response at this level successfully selects the important information from the lecture and coherently and accurately presents this information in relation to the relevant information presented in the reading. The response is well organized and occasional language errors that are present do not result in inaccurate or imprecise presentation of content or connections。

大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),這里面的關(guān)鍵詞是information和organization,也就是信息量和邏輯,至于語言,并沒有提出太多的要求,用詞和造句“秋褲”一些沒有關(guān)系。因此,只要聽力和閱讀的筆記記得較全,并且能夠把聽力中的觀點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)表達(dá)清楚就可以。需要注意的是,這部分對(duì)詞數(shù)和時(shí)間都是有要求的,官方的規(guī)定是150-225詞,我的建議是180-260詞,時(shí)限是20分鐘。關(guān)于summary的結(jié)構(gòu),一定是四段??introduction+3對(duì)detail,不需要conclusion。總體來說,這部分得高分的一定是把聽力寫得很清楚的同學(xué),事實(shí)上聽力才是考察的重點(diǎn),閱讀是用來幫助對(duì)聽力進(jìn)行理解的,同學(xué)們?cè)趯懧犃?nèi)容的時(shí)候切不可有“這個(gè)也要寫啊,沒必要吧”的想法。另外,閱讀的內(nèi)容在寫summary的時(shí)候決不可照抄。

了解了綜合寫作的評(píng)分細(xì)則,我們可以列出同學(xué)們需要鍛煉的能力列表:

1、 閱讀能力

2、 聽力和速記能力

3、 一定的改寫能力

好了,下面我們來看看應(yīng)該如何復(fù)習(xí)綜合寫作。首先,大家要對(duì)自己的閱讀和聽力能力有一個(gè)認(rèn)識(shí),首選的測試題就是ETS發(fā)布的TPO(toefl practice online),大家不妨在復(fù)習(xí)初期拿來“裸測”一下。對(duì)自己的能力有大概認(rèn)識(shí)之后,同學(xué)們一定要注意復(fù)習(xí)方法。很多同學(xué)認(rèn)為自己閱讀差就是因?yàn)椴徽J(rèn)識(shí)單詞,所以拼命背單詞;有些同學(xué)覺得自己聽力差,就花大量時(shí)間練習(xí)聽寫。這些方法本身都對(duì)能力提高很有好處,但是大家一定要記住,實(shí)戰(zhàn)才是鍛煉能力的最好方式,所以還是希望大家多做全套的綜合寫作習(xí)題,TPO有二十多套,就是很不錯(cuò)的選擇。但是TPO有一個(gè)問題,沒有很規(guī)范的范文作為參考,這是為什么很多老師開始在精講精練班上講解TPO,以幫助同學(xué)們復(fù)習(xí)。另外,還有一本書值得推薦《新托??荚噷m?xiàng)進(jìn)階——高級(jí)寫作》,這是我在自己的單項(xiàng)班上的專用教材,里面的綜合寫作并不是TPO,但卻是托??荚囌骖}還原出來的,而且配有native speaker撰寫的范文,具備不錯(cuò)的參考價(jià)值。

四、如何提升托福成績

托福考試包含有聽力、寫作、閱讀以及口語,這四項(xiàng)內(nèi)容都是相輔相成的,那一部分落下都是會(huì)影響我們的托福成績的哦。因此如果詳想對(duì)自己的托??荚囎鲆粋€(gè)好的規(guī)劃,那么找到一個(gè)專業(yè)的外教進(jìn)行練習(xí)還是很有必要的。分享一下我在用的app:留小留,里面有很多專業(yè)的托福外教可以選擇,里面的老師對(duì)于托??荚嚩加泻荛L教學(xué)的經(jīng)驗(yàn),能夠幫助你的英語練習(xí)得更加的完善哦,我長期練習(xí)的一個(gè)外教陪練是英國的Leila,她不僅口音純正,而且人超級(jí)nice。

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